Improved password description.

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 As a user of Homebase you have been given a single "account".
 
-You have received a password, that you **MUST** change before exploring Homebase with your account.
+The password you received has only a short lifespan, and **must** be changed before exploring Homebase any further.
 
-## Choosing a good password
 
-A good password is something impossible to guess, yet easy to remember.
+## Pick a good password
+
+Invent something impossible to guess, yet easy to remember.
 
  * Don't use the name of your pet dog or anything else personal.
- * Don't use plain words at all - mumbo jumbo goobledegop is much better
+ * Don't use any normal words at all - gibberish mixed with mumbo jumbo is much better
 
 Think of a phrase - a poem or a song. Pick first letter of each word - that's often a great password.
 
-## Treating your password with care
+
+## Keep your password in your head only
 
 Your password is strictly personal.
 
  * Do not write it down.
- * Do not **ever** pass it on to others - not to your father or teacher, and not to any technicical supporter.
+ * Do not **ever** reveal it to anyone. Not a friend, your boss, the police, me or other technicians.
+
+Be proud if forgetting your password: You then tried hard to pick a good one - our salute is to swiftly reset your password and provide you a new.
 
-No problem if you forget you password: We simply reset and provide you a new one.
 
- /!\ Forgetting your password is no shame: it shows that you tried hard to pick a good one!
+## Change your password
 
-## Changing your password
+Change your password here: <https://mail.homebase.dk/horde3/passwd/>
 
-You can change your password here: https://mail.homebase.dk/horde3/passwd/
 
 ## Go explore!