Slightly improved intro text.

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/intro.mdwn b/intro.mdwn
index a3b3ea2..7dc8fca 100644
--- a/intro.mdwn
+++ b/intro.mdwn
@@ -6,16 +6,15 @@ received a "username" (probably by email), and a password (probably by
 cellphone text message).
 
 The password you received has only a short lifespan, and **must** be changed
-soon:
+soon.
 
 ## Pick a good password
 
 Invent something impossible to guess, yet easy to remember.
 
 [[!template id=note text="""
- * Avoid personal info. Don't use your mother's birthday or your pet cat.
- * Avoid plain words. Gibberish mixed with mumbo jumbo is much better (robots
-   use dictionaries!).
+ * Avoid personal info, like your mother's birthday or your pet cat.
+ * Use gibberish rather than real words (robots use dictionaries!).
 """]]
 
 Suggestion: Think of a phrase - e.g. a poem or a song. Pick first letter of
@@ -28,15 +27,14 @@ Your password is strictly personal.
 
 [[!template id=note text="""
  * Do not write it down.
- * Do not **ever** reveal it to anyone. Not a friend, your boss, the police, me
-   or other technicians.
- * Be proud if you forget your password: That means you picked a strong
-   password :-)
+ * Never **ever** reveal it to anyone. Not to a friend, your boss, the police,
+   or to technicians.
+ * Be proud if you forget it: That means you picked a strong password :-)
 """]]
 
-If you loose or reveal your password then just report it, and a new one is
-created for you (and texted to you, if your cellphone number is known to the
-system).
+Don't worry if you loose or reveal your password: just ask the supporters to
+reset your password - and make sure that they have your cellphone number, then
+a new temporary password will be texted to you.
 
 
 ## Change your password